D#5, HW#3

I reviewed Tegan's and Alexis's proposals. My comments should show up in blue highlight on the shared GoogleDocs. Reading over their projects helped me to identify things I want to revise in my own. One thing in particular is, I want to specify what types of sources I will be using for research. Not only what types, but the specific names of sources to be used. From the reviews on my proposal, I've learned I will need to be sure to specifically convey exactly what my final argument will address (how to minimize the impact of depression in the workplace). Maybe rephrasing my research question will help me accomplish that. That was a bit of a surprise, as I thought it was clear. Now that I go back and look at it, I can see how it is ambiguous. Turnitin.com did not highlight any sections of my proposal in its originality analysis.